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Limelight hypothesis
Warmest whisper of misleading
Interpretation
Insolent congregant nation
         Taste the bittersweet flower
         Only for an hour will it burn

Return

Empty and heartless alibi
Cries heard only by the night
Comfort the child
Interrogate and saturate
         Innocent thinking of the lost
         Plagued cost of what you find

Rewind.
©2005-2009 ~phr3ak000000000
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Author's Comments

i hope to be back on da soon i think i am just so unbelievably tired.

this was inspired by my good friend *rider-on-the-storm he is an amazing poet and after i wrote it i was like wow, the structure is kinda similiar. not nearly as good but still similiar.

image provided by =resurgere

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:iconthesundowner:
Great poem Angel

nicely sounding when read aloud too

take care
:iconthesundowner:
i have been dead busy too
tired all the time
:icontwistedcircularstars:
I don't believe I ever comment on your work. although i think most of it is in my favorites LOL this is a great peice. Seems as though you might be developing a new style? Very impressive either way.
:iconmongolshawn:
Really cool. I dig the poem and the image looks like the dust jacket of a noir novella. Really cool.

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mongolShawn
Shawn Munguia

Fuck karma, give me 10 minutes in a dark alley.
- me
:iconphr3ak000000000:
:giggle: i did notice ;) thank you very much for everything. your support is out of this world! you should submit some work! it would be really cool to see what you do!

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I sacrifice every breath I breathe, to make you believe
~Aquemini

Save the alien
:iconphr3ak000000000:
:heart: you are so kind i am glad you think so i feel a bit weird about my work nothing feels right but i just keep writing till it does ;) thank YOU :love:

--
I sacrifice every breath I breathe, to make you believe
~Aquemini

Save the alien
:iconmongolshawn:
Not a problem, I always like your work.

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mongolShawn
Shawn Munguia

Fuck karma, give me 10 minutes in a dark alley.
- me
:iconhighpriestess:
i like this.

keep on keepin' on

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TheExquisiteCorpse

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