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Thank you to ~kedralynn-stock for the wonderful image!

You held me so close
Yet now you flow in a
Way I do not know
It shows!
You saw!
I hold your jaw
As you
See me so raw
With flaw and
No towel to
Cover to smother
Shhh…
Why did you run here?
The thunder
From somewhere
Releasing one
Last tear I hear
You slam.
The kitchen cupboard



"Breakfast" by Angel Morningstar

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:iconmr-atrus:
Well done, I like it.

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I can't be home tonight
I will be back, it's alright
No one could ever love me
Half as good as you - "When Angel's Fly Away" Cold

Mr-Atrus' Poetic Ga
:iconbloodkitsune:
...painfull?
agh... I'm not shure if I get the whole poem ^^;

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... Vade Retro Libidinosus Custodus!:spyed:
smoke pencils for inspiration :painter: [link]
:iconphr3ak000000000:
LoL what was painful? reading the poem or??? what dont you understand, i can try to explain. it is about someone being in a relationship... they are still together, and although still living in the same house you feel utterly alone and afraid. afraid to ask what's going on, and the tension within those emotions. thats what its about.

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I sacrifice every breath I breathe, to make you believe
~Aquemini

*burn-p0etry=Deviant-Underground
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:iconbloodkitsune:
"afraid to ask what's going on, and the tension within those emotions." -----> that's painfull
no, I get it :)
thanks for explainig though

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... Vade Retro Libidinosus Custodus!:spyed:
smoke pencils for inspiration :painter: [link]
:iconorunitia:
It kinda sounds like a relationship going from good to bad in the time span of a slamming cupboard.

Very very sad... I hope things go better for you in the future...
:hug: :cling:

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I have lived a life of two,
Seen a dream broken
Crossed a stream unwettened
And watched as the sky
Turned amber and blue.
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:iconrider-on-the-storm:
man relationships suck.
there is alot of emotion behind this peice...more then meets the eye. Great jon :)

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"in america as the media hushes
millions of eyes float to the marble
of time where a stroke causes a collapse"
- splinter (wallpaper)
:iconrider-on-the-storm:
man relationships suck.
there is alot of emotion behind this peice...more then meets the eye. Great job, even
:)

--
"in america as the media hushes
millions of eyes float to the marble
of time where a stroke causes a collapse"
- splinter (wallpaper)

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